If someone could please look over my personal website and give me feedback, I will be eternally grateful
https://gioxcare.wixsite.com/portfolio

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    Nice art you’ve got there.. well done ^^ and that Goblin collage is just terrific, I love it <3

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    I am absolutely not at all qualified to give you feedback (simply because I don’t know what to look for) so I’m saying what I say as a layperson without any context:

    1. It looks amazing. And your art is so gorgeous. ^^ I’ve always admired that skill.
    2. It took me a few minutes to understand what you wanted to showcase with the website. Perhaps that could be brought out a little better on the home page? [Again, layperson who doesn’t know what to look for, you know better – and it really is gorgeous.]
    3. I love the Robotic Hand – what is it? It’s brilliant!
    4. Also appreciate the tribute page.

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      Thank you so much!!! This is very helpful

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      Just realized I didn’t answer your question – oops. The robotic hand was a project I had to do before I could get an internship. The company wanted me to create a robotic hand that moved when I moved my fingers. It was so much fun to do!!!! I use a 3D printer to create the robotic hand. Then, I incorporated a glove to control motors built into the robotic hand

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        It’s super cool ^^
        It sounds like quite a lot for an internship though – your field is clearly very, very interesting.

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    First, you have some really nice work here. I like your digital illustrations and the cds are very eye-catching.

    Second, as @greenfields suggest, your home page needs more focus. Perhaps a slideshow of the pieces that you are most proud of, and also have some kind of cohesion. As you have it right now, I’m not really sure what to look at. Having a portfolio/works tab at the top could then bring your audience to your full portfolio.

    Third, your about page needs some proofreading. I think if you read it out loud you will hear some of the errors. Also, under your name remove the “is an” just leave the “illustrator & coder based in…”

    Fourth, good job! I hope I wasn’t too harsh…

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    Just here for your Goblin collage! Daebek! 😍

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