*Insert BTS “RUN” as background music*
Toki at her best was a star Errand Girl. For two weeks she had followed and successfully conned got evidence on one of the top loan-sharks in town. She had jumped from his apartment and raced all the way to the courthouse, where she handed over the last-minute evidence to the only professional lawyer in dramas Greenfields.
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But such excitement came at a price. After weeks of doing night duty Toki was in no mood or shape to go to Errand Boys Incorporated when the summons came. And where was her checked shirt?
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In the end she was late to the emergency board meeting, no thanks to Secretary Ma’s hung-over antics. Toki caught the end of CEO Shadow’s stirring speech: “And thus, we will save the world one rooftop at a time! Thank you very much.”
Toki asked Egads (Ahjumma!) what was going on. Egads looked her and said “Look after yourself first. I heard you’re off this mission. If you need me I’ll be in the library. We have a knitting club.”
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Toki’s day had just gone from bad to worse. How could they leave her out of the secret mission? Why? WAE? She crumpled down onto the floor in tears and sobbing because there is no other way to cry in dramas 💔
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Kitty and Cloggie did their best to comfort Toki. Coco, meanwhile, had finally got to have a cup of tea. She was joined by someone who had also ditched the meeting: Suited Minion. His name is still unknown, but he is a photographer. That much we know because Egads caught this on his camera later that day:
It was decided that Toki needed an Errand Girls karaoke night. Cloggie had her dance shoes, and Coco was always up for a dance. Kitty started practicing her favourite dance move:
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Everyone knew Toki was bad at dancing, but she didn’t care. Not today.
She also gave a painfully bad rendition of B1A4’s “Lonely”.
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Greenfields arrived a bit later with Neener in tow. Neener was suffering from selective amnesia after nearly being hit by ToD. She had no idea how she was rescued or what happened afterwards. She had a vague memory that Greenfields asked somebody for ramyun, but that was it. Kitty was shocked. Greenfields said it was just ramyun.
“I reiterate” said Greefields. “It was just ramyun.”
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Coco couldn’t help herself anymore and asked Toki if something had happened the night before. Nothing, said Toki.
In the meantime, the Errand Guys had relocated to a sauna for a gratuitous display of abs.
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Also shower scenes.
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Shadow and Suitless Minion asked Ma Jo Gu what had happened the night before to turn him into such a wreck? Nothing, he said. He just drank too much.
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Back at the karaoke place, suddenly five guys in black clothes and baseball caps broke into the room. “Which one of you is Shadow’s girl?” they asked. Cloggie put on her hood (which means business).
Cloggie single-handedly sent three of them flying while Coco and Kitty beat another with their microphones. Toki suddenly recovered her lost flair and jumped into the fray.
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Greenfields answered Kitty’s phone during all this ruckus: “Hello, Shadow? Yes, someone tried to kidnap Kitty.” A thug went crashing into a mirror as Neener showed off her geeenius fighting skills – “Yes, ok, bye.” When the policemen arrived, they found the thugs all tied up. Toki was happy: she might be off the mission, but she could still kick butt with her friends.
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The next day Shadow showed up at EBI with two bodyguards:
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Kitty spluttered that she didn’t need bodyguards, but Morpheus said that Jin was his favourite BTS member and Neo revealed that he was ARMY. They made plans to go to the next concert together, in masks and hoodies of course so nobody would recognise them.
Bloopers: Shadow introducing Morpheus and Neo because this dang gif won’t post correctly
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Credits roll
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Secretary found Toki drinking and mumbling why it was so difficult to save up for a rooftop house. He sat down and said that her struggles were nothing ( “Excuse me?…” There was fast-forwarded argument over who had the most difficult life).
Ma Jo Go whined that he had been ditched by his ex-fiancée when he took selfies instead of cutting her steak. She had called him an unrefined country boy. “So Hyun-ah, I’m sorry!”
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Without thinking, Toki offered a truce. “we’re not friends or anything, but if you need to talk to someone I’ll listen” she said without thinking. He yelled “Chinguyaaaa!” and passed out, only two glasses down.
Toki made a note to never offer him a drink again.
Oooh, Errand Girl Karaoke is such a good title! Why didn’t I think of that?
Glad you liked it hehe. I had fun writing it, and I confess that this time I didn’t use the bingo trope card (yay for independent writing!) 😀
@hotcocoagirl I tried to leave the mission vague to let your imagination run tropey wild. Is it too vague? Mainly:
1) Toki has been declared out, but she now has Secretary on her side, so…
2) Shadow has a plan.
3) Somebody tried to kidnap Kitty to target Shadow. Pfft.
4) Ahjumma knows. She knows everything.
How about mission “Find the Algorithm?” Ok, I’m just being silly now. I need sleep.
This is getting better and better. 😂😂 Can’t wait for the next installment. If it’s okay, I have ideas about something I could add as member of the Rooftop Residents’ Support Squad. ^^
Glad you liked it 😉 Oh yes, ideas are always welcome! I don’t know what @hotcocoagirl has in mind for the next installment, but it would be great to have you on board with the writing. 😀
Thanks Kitty! Glad you found it a fun story.
Yes, it’s a good thing Errand Girls hang out as a group. I’m not sure Toki could have beat all those dudes on her own to save Kitty 😛
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WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 1:59 PM
ERRAND BOYS STORY!!
Episode 6: Toki’s rough day, or when tropes have taken over and the writer has no control over them
This is the follow-up episode to Coco’s Quest for A Cup of Tea. Proceed at your own risk.
Starring: @wishfultoki @hotcocoagirl @cloggie @fatcat007 @egads @neener @greenfields.
Enjoy (or not!) @suriyana-shah @ndlessjoie
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:07 PM
*Insert BTS “RUN” as background music*
Toki at her best was a star Errand Girl. For two weeks she had followed and successfully
connedgot evidence on one of the top loan-sharks in town. She had jumped from his apartment and raced all the way to the courthouse, where she handed over the last-minute evidence tothe only professional lawyer in dramasGreenfields..
But such excitement came at a price. After weeks of doing night duty Toki was in no mood or shape to go to Errand Boys Incorporated when the summons came. And where was her checked shirt?
.
In the end she was late to the emergency board meeting, no thanks to Secretary Ma’s hung-over antics. Toki caught the end of CEO Shadow’s stirring speech: “And thus, we will save the world one rooftop at a time! Thank you very much.”
Everyone clapped.
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Toki asked Egads (Ahjumma!) what was going on. Egads looked her and said “Look after yourself first. I heard you’re off this mission. If you need me I’ll be in the library. We have a knitting club.”
.
Toki’s day had just gone from bad to worse. How could they leave her out of the secret mission? Why? WAE? She crumpled down onto the floor in tears and sobbing
because there is no other way to cry in dramas💔.
Kitty and Cloggie did their best to comfort Toki. Coco, meanwhile, had finally got to have a cup of tea. She was joined by someone who had also ditched the meeting: Suited Minion. His name is still unknown, but he is a photographer. That much we know because Egads caught this on his camera later that day:
It was a great day for gossip at EBI.
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:22 PM
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WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:24 PM
It was decided that Toki needed an Errand Girls karaoke night. Cloggie had her dance shoes, and Coco was always up for a dance. Kitty started practicing her favourite dance move:
.
Everyone knew Toki was bad at dancing, but she didn’t care. Not today.
She also gave a painfully bad rendition of B1A4’s “Lonely”.
.
.
Greenfields arrived a bit later with Neener in tow. Neener was suffering from selective amnesia after nearly being hit by ToD. She had no idea how she was rescued or what happened afterwards. She had a vague memory that Greenfields asked somebody for ramyun, but that was it. Kitty was shocked. Greenfields said it was just ramyun.
“I reiterate” said Greefields. “It was just ramyun.”
.
Coco couldn’t help herself anymore and asked Toki if something had happened the night before. Nothing, said Toki.
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:29 PM
In the meantime, the Errand Guys had relocated to a sauna for a gratuitous display of abs.
.
Also shower scenes.
.
Shadow and Suitless Minion asked Ma Jo Gu what had happened the night before to turn him into such a wreck? Nothing, he said. He just drank too much.
.
Back at the karaoke place, suddenly five guys in black clothes and baseball caps broke into the room. “Which one of you is Shadow’s girl?” they asked. Cloggie put on her hood (which means business).
EXO’s “Growl” started to play.
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 3:44 PM
“Suitless minion?!” *Coco giggles uncontrollably*
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Hehe, you caught that 😉
Cloggie
July 5, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Ooh, it seems that I’m pretty awesome when I mean business.
*runs off to try this in real life*
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Comment was deleted
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Cloggie single-handedly sent three of them flying while Coco and Kitty beat another with their microphones. Toki suddenly recovered her lost flair and jumped into the fray.
.
Greenfields answered Kitty’s phone during all this ruckus: “Hello, Shadow? Yes, someone tried to kidnap Kitty.” A thug went crashing into a mirror as Neener showed off her geeenius fighting skills – “Yes, ok, bye.” When the policemen arrived, they found the thugs all tied up. Toki was happy: she might be off the mission, but she could still kick butt with her friends.
.
The next day Shadow showed up at EBI with two bodyguards:
.
Kitty spluttered that she didn’t need bodyguards, but Morpheus said that Jin was his favourite BTS member and Neo revealed that he was ARMY. They made plans to go to the next concert together, in masks and hoodies of course so nobody would recognise them.
THE END
mugyuljoie is preciousss
July 5, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Thank you for the body guards. I love how Neo looks over his glasses.
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Bloopers: Shadow introducing Morpheus and Neo
because this dang gif won’t post correctly.
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Credits roll
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Secretary found Toki drinking and mumbling why it was so difficult to save up for a rooftop house. He sat down and said that her struggles were nothing (
“Excuse me?…” There was fast-forwarded argument over who had the most difficult life).Ma Jo Go whined that he had been ditched by his ex-fiancée when he took selfies instead of cutting her steak. She had called him an unrefined country boy. “So Hyun-ah, I’m sorry!”
.
Without thinking, Toki offered a truce. “we’re not friends or anything, but if you need to talk to someone I’ll listen” she said without thinking. He yelled “Chinguyaaaa!” and passed out, only two glasses down.
Toki made a note to never offer him a drink again.
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 3:30 PM
… so, in my head So Hyun ah was his little sister who disappeared. But your explanation is much funnier 😂😂
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Also this was such a fun story! I love Errand Girl Karaoke!!
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Also @wishfultoki and @cloggie are now my fighting girl dream team
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Also also: @fatcat007 has the best boyfriend. Give me a guy who supports my fangirling any day.
Fatcat007 (Kitty 💜)
July 5, 2018 at 10:42 PM
My boyfriend also got me Army bodyguards. He’s so thoughtful (or the writer is 😘)
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Oooh, Errand Girl Karaoke is such a good title! Why didn’t I think of that?
Glad you liked it hehe. I had fun writing it, and I confess that this time I didn’t use the bingo trope card (yay for independent writing!) 😀
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Hmmm, I’m wondering where to take the story from here ~ What is the mission? Who were the kittynappers? What else has Neener forgotten?
Cocoa, The Fake Poet of February
July 5, 2018 at 4:23 PM
And I’m so proud of you for writing your own cliche destiny *wipes away single tear*
WishfulToki
July 5, 2018 at 4:32 PM
@hotcocoagirl I tried to leave the mission vague to let your imagination run tropey wild. Is it too vague? Mainly:
1) Toki has been declared out, but she now has Secretary on her side, so…
2) Shadow has a plan.
3) Somebody tried to kidnap Kitty to target Shadow. Pfft.
4) Ahjumma knows. She knows everything.
How about mission “Find the Algorithm?” Ok, I’m just being silly now. I need sleep.
greenfields
July 5, 2018 at 6:25 PM
This is getting better and better. 😂😂 Can’t wait for the next installment. If it’s okay, I have ideas about something I could add as member of the Rooftop Residents’ Support Squad. ^^
greenfields
July 5, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Also that, “I reiterate” sounds exactly like me.😅
WishfulToki
July 6, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Glad you liked it 😉 Oh yes, ideas are always welcome! I don’t know what @hotcocoagirl has in mind for the next installment, but it would be great to have you on board with the writing. 😀
greenfields
July 6, 2018 at 6:39 AM
I loved it! (Not to toot my own horn or anything but) the teaser/announcement has gone up! 😀
http://www.dramabeans.com/members/greenfields/activity/540135/
WishfulToki
July 6, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Wow, that was fast! As usual, everything happens while I was sleeping.
Thanks for mentioning it! I’d somehow missed the notification.
greenfields
July 6, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Notifs tend to magically disappear here on DB. XD
neener ~ Inside the Magic Shop ~
July 5, 2018 at 7:51 PM
This was amazing! Feeling proud from knocking someone!
WishfulToki
July 6, 2018 at 6:35 AM
You are a natural talent, even if you have amnesia LOL
Fatcat007 (Kitty 💜)
July 5, 2018 at 10:52 PM
HAHAHA
Loved that Errand girl squad can take care of themselves.
Cracked up over the entire plot. Good job Toki.
WishfulToki
July 6, 2018 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Kitty! Glad you found it a fun story.
Yes, it’s a good thing Errand Girls hang out as a group. I’m not sure Toki could have beat all those dudes on her own to save Kitty 😛