Ahh it seems like I missed the island party,
So I’ll just make a POETRY SLAM ENTRY
At the event by the wonderful @wishfultoki

See you later Alligator
(A post APAD ep10 Feels comment-ary)

I did not see coming, that sinking of my OTP.
Many will agree it was a great tragedy.
Sadly, I wondered how to say “Farewell to thee”.
So I decided to write my own poetry.
I called it “An Ode to Ageo-sshi”
And this is how it went-
“Ageo was born to be wild and free,
But the threads of fate held her to a plain white tee.
There a decade, nurtured and nestled by a warm heart, she spent.
So it was not without regret she returned home, to the sea”
Now I know this is rubbish, I can’t seem to put it eloquently,
Could remember no rules other than the rhyming, apparently.
But my heart hurts and my vision is blurry.
So for all of this beanies, please excuse me.

(Oh God why am I here?!.. I have exams I should go study!!)

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    I don’t want to influence anyone’s vote, but this is amazing. Could you post it on OT as well (with permalink) so other beanies can see it? http://www.dramabeans.com/2018/04/open-thread-549/

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    ‘But the threads of fate held her to a plain white tee.’
    Sheer poetic brilliance.

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    I officially give any votes I’ve received to this wonderful slam!!!
    Awesome!!
    @wishfultoki, can I do that, please??

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    This is the most beautiful, eloquent thing dedicated to a fabric animal I’ve seen in my life. 😂😂😍 Thank you, @papeclip!

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      Pwahahaha. Yes i was thaaaaaat invested!

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        😂 Thank you for your investment, I’m sure we can all relate!

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          Haha this ship really launched my inner (bad) poet.
          And given the number of odes to Alligator here on db, I thought where else would my pain be acknowledged and empathised with.

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      Ok maybe I will give this poetry thing a try once again if my second OTP (hint: BoHo) bites the dust. Because i think sadness is the trigger.
      Then we shall see if your theory still holds…🙃🙃

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        Uhuhuh 😳 oh dear. I suppose the poetry will be a wonderful balance, but I don’t want tragedy for BoHo…

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    This is awesome!!!!

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    First, go study.
    Second, all you talented beanies are giving me existential crisis. What am I doing with my life when I can’t even write poems?!

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      “First, go study”
      Oops thanks for reminding me..just on laaast YouTube video I promise!!
      I am sure if you witnessed the most heartbreaking break-up like I did, your inner dormant poetess shall surely awaken.

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        Haha lol. Well sorry if I sounded strict 😂
        In my country nothing is as important as doing well in exams. Studies comes first, sports, arts, extra curriculars…what’s that? 😂
        So it’s an automated inbuilt response from me that “go study for that exam & do well!” 😂 hmph! Okay, last YT vid will do 😛

        But taking a brake on db once in a while is good ^^ (unless you go rogue like joo young, joo young)

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          Aww no not strict at all! Cause I too have the same kind of parents who go “Again on your phone, stop that and study” “Why are you floating around the house, go sit down and study” 😅😅.

          Not going to go rouge like Jooyoung Jooyoung
          *Looks everywhere else to avoid eye-contact*

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            “Don’t float around the house” lol 😂 same 😂

            *Narrows eyes at you*
            You say you are not like joo young, joo young then what are you still doing here, PC, PC ? 😑

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          Ok I am going now mommy
          *scampers off*

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        I saw the break up & cruelly laughed.
        I’m a heartless soulless zombie… 😩

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          I’d say your laughter is probably a coping mechanism! Yup thats the most plausible explanation. Too bad my brain dint send such signals *sniff* *sniff* *fans tears*

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