I am absolutely not at all qualified to give you feedback (simply because I don’t know what to look for) so I’m saying what I say as a layperson without any context:
1. It looks amazing. And your art is so gorgeous. ^^ I’ve always admired that skill.
2. It took me a few minutes to understand what you wanted to showcase with the website. Perhaps that could be brought out a little better on the home page? [Again, layperson who doesn’t know what to look for, you know better – and it really is gorgeous.]
3. I love the Robotic Hand – what is it? It’s brilliant!
4. Also appreciate the tribute page.
Just realized I didn’t answer your question – oops. The robotic hand was a project I had to do before I could get an internship. The company wanted me to create a robotic hand that moved when I moved my fingers. It was so much fun to do!!!! I use a 3D printer to create the robotic hand. Then, I incorporated a glove to control motors built into the robotic hand
First, you have some really nice work here. I like your digital illustrations and the cds are very eye-catching.
Second, as @greenfields suggest, your home page needs more focus. Perhaps a slideshow of the pieces that you are most proud of, and also have some kind of cohesion. As you have it right now, I’m not really sure what to look at. Having a portfolio/works tab at the top could then bring your audience to your full portfolio.
Third, your about page needs some proofreading. I think if you read it out loud you will hear some of the errors. Also, under your name remove the “is an” just leave the “illustrator & coder based in…”
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 11:39 AM
If someone could please look over my personal website and give me feedback, I will be eternally grateful
https://gioxcare.wixsite.com/portfolio
Lilia
January 20, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Nice art you’ve got there.. well done ^^ and that Goblin collage is just terrific, I love it <3
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thank you!!
greenfields
January 20, 2018 at 12:09 PM
I am absolutely not at all qualified to give you feedback (simply because I don’t know what to look for) so I’m saying what I say as a layperson without any context:
1. It looks amazing. And your art is so gorgeous. ^^ I’ve always admired that skill.
2. It took me a few minutes to understand what you wanted to showcase with the website. Perhaps that could be brought out a little better on the home page? [Again, layperson who doesn’t know what to look for, you know better – and it really is gorgeous.]
3. I love the Robotic Hand – what is it? It’s brilliant!
4. Also appreciate the tribute page.
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Thank you so much!!! This is very helpful
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Just realized I didn’t answer your question – oops. The robotic hand was a project I had to do before I could get an internship. The company wanted me to create a robotic hand that moved when I moved my fingers. It was so much fun to do!!!! I use a 3D printer to create the robotic hand. Then, I incorporated a glove to control motors built into the robotic hand
greenfields
January 20, 2018 at 6:22 PM
It’s super cool ^^
It sounds like quite a lot for an internship though – your field is clearly very, very interesting.
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Haha i wish!! I’m still in college and a bit unsure about what career path I’ll take
egads aka Dame Maggie
January 20, 2018 at 12:49 PM
First, you have some really nice work here. I like your digital illustrations and the cds are very eye-catching.
Second, as @greenfields suggest, your home page needs more focus. Perhaps a slideshow of the pieces that you are most proud of, and also have some kind of cohesion. As you have it right now, I’m not really sure what to look at. Having a portfolio/works tab at the top could then bring your audience to your full portfolio.
Third, your about page needs some proofreading. I think if you read it out loud you will hear some of the errors. Also, under your name remove the “is an” just leave the “illustrator & coder based in…”
Fourth, good job! I hope I wasn’t too harsh…
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Not harsh at all. I really appreciate the feedback!
egads aka Dame Maggie
January 20, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Oh good. I was taking a break from grading and was worried my grading voice bled over to DBs.
I forgot to say cool robot hand!
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Are you a teacher?
egads aka Dame Maggie
January 20, 2018 at 1:30 PM
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egads aka Dame Maggie
January 20, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Yes. English comp.
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 2:27 PM
@egads does it look a bit better now?
egads aka Dame Maggie
January 20, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Yes! A much bigger impact. Your first slide is very attention getting, and I really love your second slide. I think it would be a great book cover.
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 3:02 PM
@egads thank you so much for all of your help!!
Ally
January 20, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Just here for your Goblin collage! Daebek! 😍
giocare ๐ป๐
January 20, 2018 at 6:26 PM
thank you!! Here is the original post: http://dansphil.tumblr.com/post/155269002306/you-get-into-the-biggest-fights-with-the-people